There are many situations in real life in which you’ll need to exchange information and/or express feelings and opinions in writing. Bear in mind that when writing, we don’t have our counterpart in front of us; he /she won’t be able to ask you for clarification or repetition, he can’t get any additional information through stress or intonation, facial expression, etc. It’s all about written words. Therefore, we must be clear, organised and as accurate as possible to succeed written communication. Practice writing compositions and try to read those from your classmates too.
Here you have some advice about how to deal with writing compositions:
A-Select topic or Study the title /assignment you’ve been given.
B- Brainstorming of ideas: Gather ideas and organize them
C- Express your ideas effectively
D- Proofreading: Revise your composition before handing it in
E- About your teacher’s corrections
A. 1) Select topic or 2) Study the title /assignment
1) Select topic
- Choose a subject you know something about. Think about facts and opinions, recall knowledge and personal background experience.
- Distinguish between the following types of subjects:
Practical: letter, reports, articles, etc. Express yourself with clarity, smoothly, with appropriateness and logic. This type of writings are about facts and everyday situations. Little imagination and creative response is expected from you.
Imaginative: characters, descriptions, personal, argument, narrative, critical… Creative response is expected: originality, stimulating content or persuasive arguments.
2) Study title /assignment: If you are given a title or theme for your essay studying it will:
- enable you to think about what you know or don’t know about it. If you can choose between more than one title choose the most appealing to you. Think carefully; If you are interested in the subject, your essay will be better.
- help you find different ways to tackle it (could this be a description, a narrative, something humorous, ironic, dramatic…?)
- choose the best option for you.
B. Gather ideas, and organize them
- The Point: Ask yourself the following questions: what’s the point of the essay? What’s your thesis? Your main idea? What are the secondary ideas developing the main idea?
- Relevance: Write only about the subject, not about whatever.
- Beginnings and Endings : a good beginning will ensure readers go on, it’ll also give the first, and probably most valuable impression. A good ending will also influence your reader’s opinion.
- Shape or structure the contents of the essay.
- Reflect and be original.
1) Having ideas: Jot down any ideas that come to your mind. Organize them later.
If ideas are slow to flow…
- Ask yourself a series of questions about the title or the theme to see if anything suggests itself: Where? When? Why? How? Who? What?
- Another means of calling forth ideas, particularly for a descriptive essay, is to take each of the senses in turn and see whether it can be fruitful when applied to the subject. The senses are sight, hearing, touch, taste and smell.
- You can think in categories of knowledge – political, religious, personal, physical, social, historical, geographical, economic, artistic, moral, creative, etc. It is particularly useful for argumentative texts. Choose the most productive for your case.
2) Organising ideas. When organising your ideas, keep this in mind:
- Clarity: be clear about your intentions, aims and content.
- Relevance: include what’s necessary; facts or interesting description (no beating about the bush!).
- Fluency and Coherence: arrange your content in an easy-to-read way. Avoid gaps and/or repetitions.
You must have a plan; think about the structure of your text. Your ideas should be arranged in a logical pattern that enables you to see the beginning, the course your essay will take, and how it will end. If some of the ideas don’t fit into the framework, discard them.
C. Express your ideas effectively
1) Approach (Enfoque).
The approach will help you to write a unified whole! It refers to the place where you’re narrating from; where your vision is. If you stay in that place, your writing will be unified, it won’t be broken up in unconnected pieces.
Examples of approaches for descriptions
- 24 hours: You could use a time-span as the unifying factor. You could begin your account at dawn, then follow the changing scene throughout the day, ending with nightfall.
- People: You could concentrate on people, describing each in turn.
- Activities: Or you could do the same with whatever people are doing.
- Panorama: Imagine you are taking a panorama photograph of the scene. Begin with a general scene and sweep your camera slowly to end with detailed descriptions.
- Contrast: You could treat the subject focusing in all the contrasts (more impressionistic).
Approaches for an argumentative essay
- Organize your material under pros and cons, points for and against the argument. A contrast between two different stands can help you write about the subject.
- However, you could develop your own opinions. You will have to be clear about the point(s) you want to make. Then you’ll have to explain your reasons for stating them (why do you say that?). Try to say things which are relevant (content) and not vague comments and opinions.
- You may order your points under the headings pros & cons. Decide which side of the argument you favour, and how best to counter the points put forward on the other side.
- What kind of conclusion will you arrive at? You will usually end with your own view, the one you have been leading up to in your presentation of the argument.
2) Paragraphs
Almost any piece of writing is divided into paragraphs. In the classic paragraph, for example, the topic sentence, a short sentence which tells you what that particular paragraph is about, and the transition to the next idea, another short sentence, fall at the beginning and the end.
Within a paragraph, all the information given should be unified, that is, it should deal with that specific aspect of the subject which has been introduced through the topic sentence. The purpose behind using paragraphs is to help the reader: when she/he comes to the end of one paragraph and begins the next, she knows that she is moving on to another facet of the subject being written about. It also helps the writer to build structure.
Logical progression
Do you think it is ordered logically? Does it help the reader to follow the argument? If you are aware of its effectiveness you will be able to be critical.
Beginnings & endings: The two most important aspects of any essay are how to begin and how to finish.
Opening sentence: If you don’t begin in an interesting way, a reader will hardly be encouraged to go on reading. If you end weakly, any power you have achieved or interest you have aroused in the body of your essay will be dissipated. Examples:
How did that alligator get in the bath?’ demanded my father one morning at breakfast. (The opening of a short story called «My Pet».)
It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife (Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen)
There are two types of selfishness: doing what you want to do, and making others do what you want. (Book review in New Statesman, Michael Holroyd)
When Carmella gave me the present of a hearing trumpet she may have foreseen some of the consequences. (The Hearing Trumpet, Leonora Carrington)
It is very seldom that mere ordinary people like John and myself secure ancestral halls for the summer. (The Yellow Wallpaper, Charlotte Perkins Gilman)
Some guide-lines which emerge from these examples:
- Try the surprise attack or shock tactics.
- Use a quotation to introduce your argument.
- Try to use words to create an atmosphere.
- Begin with a wittily-phrased summing-up of an idea.
- Begin with a question.
- Begin pushing the reader to wonder why? or what happens next? or what’s it all about?
Bad beginnings: To avoid a bad beginning, get to the subject-matter straight away and stick to it till the end, but avoid obvious statements, they are boring for a beginning. Examples of bad beginnings:
Water has many uses. (Title: Water)
As with most questions, there are two sides of the argument. (Title: Capital Punishment)
It was a hot summer’s day (Title: A Hot Summer’s Day)
Endings: When you have said what you want to say stop, don’t go rambling on repeating yourself.
If you begin your final paragraph with a sentence like this: Summing up then… In conclusion… So it can be seen that… you are almost certain to be boring and obvious, and you are very likely to be in danger of repeating what you have already said.
Try to leave the reader with a surprise, a new angle, an original point of view which leaves him / her thinking. It must be relevant to the subject and to what you have already written but should give a new insight into the subject. Above all, end strongly and firmly. Don’t just fade away. What method can you use to make an ending effective – shock?, surprise?, firm conclusion?, inevitability?, fresh angle?, a climax?, an intentional anti-climax?
D. Proofreading
No matter how many times you re-read your paper, you are likely to miss some of your most frequent errors:
Read slowly, aloud if you can, thinking you’re the reader. You depend wholly on words and their logical progression to get the meaning and feelings of the writer.
Read in detail, line by line (sentence structure, punctuation, coherence), word by word (phrases, cohesion), letter by letter (spelling, grammar issues too). You may need to read your paper at least twice—the first time, to check the general coherence, and the second to identify particular errors and mistakes.
Check usage and sentence structure:
- Subject/Verb Agreement: find the main verb and check it matches its subject in number
- Pronoun Reference Agreement: check if you are using the right pronoun (number, gender) for the phrase you are replacing with a pronoun
- Tenses: check the use of tenses, and how they combine
- Syntax: sentence order
- Adjectives and adverbials: check their place
- Connectors: What are you connecting? Use connectors to write a cohesive text, this is, don’t abuse, use them to facilitate reading and connections.
Check spelling and punctuation
- Examine each word in the paper individually
- Use your dictionary at home: check spelling whenever you are not completely sure
- To check punctuation you need to read aloud, because your intonation will help you punctuate. In writing, punctuation replaces stress, rhythm and intonation
- Use full stops. Spanish tends to use subordinate sentences more often than English. Simple brief sentences are alright in English. Of course, it is OK to combine this with clear subordinate and coordinate sentences. What I mean is you can use short sentences
- Check commas and missing commas, connectors and conjunctions. If there is a complete sentence after a comma it might be necessary to use a full stop instead, or to place a comma before the conjunction. Connectors are often followed by commas, conjunctions are sometimes preceded by commas (in long sentences)
- Use long dashes. They serve to extend a previous idea. In Spanish we use colons or brackets for this, at times. You needn’t close the long dash if you reach the end of the sentence.
- Check apostrophes
- Check for left-out words and make sure you haven’t doubled any words by using an extra pronoun.
E. Your teacher’s corrections
When the teacher corrects your work, you need to study your corrections, mistakes and errors and do a follow-up.
Learn how to fix your errors and mistakes. Errors need some study. Mistakes can be solved if you pay attention when you proofread your text. Use an error-correction chart (see an example here: https://soniaeoi.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?action=edit&post=17
NOW, GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING!